Sunday, January 9, 2011

Final- Performance Day.

So for i decided for performance day imma be lazy and bring my guitar and sing a song..
In a way it works cause songs have lyrics and in my opinion lyrics are the best and most entertaining form of poetry. This is a simple acoustic song i wrote and preform.
Pretend - Proving Ground



Where where to begin?I, I can't recall when

I forget, I forget, I forget.
Hold, hold to the end. I, no i can't pretend
I'm a mess, I'm a mess, I'm a mess.


The king has lost his crown
and i have fallen down


Oh no your not wrong i, i just can't go on.
I confess, I confess, I confess.
Once again i can't win so watch me walk away.


The king has lost his crown

 and i have fallen down.


Back down again, no i won't pretend. I can't pretend.
somewhere along the way, no i got it wrong and i can't go on today.
Please don't pretend

Sunday, December 12, 2010

Ace Ventura Pet Detective

OW: Ace Ventura is known for his amazing animal interaction and detective work. In he beginning he is taking time off in a munk Asramn.
The Call: Ace is contacted by a man named Greenwall who needs his help in a case.
Refusal: Ace refuses saying he is needed at the Asramn.
Mentor: The head monk talks Ace into the case saying they are running out of space and he should use his talents, Ace still refuses. Head monk gives ace his medal as a promt to leave ( Ace: "This took you 80 years to acchive!?" Head Monk: "Thats okay i don't like it anymore."
Threshold: Ace seems to be quite a handfull making jokes out of every obsticle they encounter. (Flight Attendant: Peanut? Ace: No thanks i have one already, its quite bulky but i consider it a carry on.
Test's allies enemy's: Ace and greenwall are to work together to solve the mystery of the missing White Bat (the only animal ace dislikes) that is sacred to the Watchati tribe. Ace learns that the tribe is going to go into a war with another tribe if they do not find their precious bat. Ace and greenwall travel to the Watchati's village and meet the strange tribe along with its "Head Cheif" who spits in aces face a first sight, ace is told that is an honor in their culture so he spits a giant lugi in the cheifs face. ace learns about poachers rumored to have stolen the sacred bat.
Approach: Ace journey's into the dwelling cave of the sacred white bat to look for clues he is extremely scared cause he is terrified of bats! Ace runs out of the cave screaming like a baby.
Ordeal: He spy's on the right hand man of aces employer of the case and thinks he might be behind the missing bat. Ace than kidnaps the man and takes him in for questioning but than learn's that the man is innocent and awkwardly releases him.
Reward: Ace than finds the bat in the hands of the poachers! Ace gets caught by the poachers sneaking in their lair and is tied to a raft going off a giant waterfall.
The Road Back: Ace canno't figure out who hired the poachers, he meditates and than recieves the awnser to the motive of the case GUANO! "Bat Shit"
Resurrection: Ace has got his man, and its the guy who hired him in the first place? why did he do it? Ace learns that he was just a distraction to insure that the bat was missing and that he could take control of the cave that had lots of guano in it without the watchatis interfering
Return with elixir: Ace steals the bat and saves the dat returning it to the Watchati's yay

Sunday, December 5, 2010

50 words that's it!

The Adventure's of Phil Conforworthy Mcslaventhugnerboccenthatchersiville the worm


Phil was a worm. He lived in a old rusty can and really didn't like it that much, you see phil lived in washington and it rained quite often....so big deal right? Well imagine rain 10 times it's size nailing a tin roof.  That sound sucked! So Phil moved.

Monday, November 29, 2010

Blurbs

The Paperthin Hymn -Anberlin
Late night in a hospital room there is distressed man sitting beside his unconscious wife on her hospital bed. He is in denial knowing he is losing his wife. He suffers countless sleepless nights with these thoughts polluting his mind. He spends every last moment he can with her during the day making it seem like everything is going to be okay. Sooner than later all the heartache get's to him and he is the one lying on his death bed when his wife awakens in recovery.


Bored Of Your Love- Meg & Dia
Hopeless romantic guy fall's in love with a girl. He is all over it, she isn't so interested. She is bored of him and just getting tired of it, he is unstable but  not going to give up. He's giving it all he's got trying to make things interesting she blows him off her shoulder, she wants for forget about it to her its a mess. He want's to never forget all the moments they spent.

Facedown- The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
Guy takes a liking to this girl and is inspired by her. She is in an abusive relationship and just puts up with it the guy is frusterated she stays with her boyfriend who beats on her. She hides her bruises and scars with make up and is living a lie pretending its all okay. Guy confronts "boyfriend" saying do you feel like a man when you push her around? do you feel beter now? He gets angry beats on her again she screams she's had enough and its over.

A Change In Pace- Proving Ground
Things aren't going so hot for lonely guy. He works a dead end job and it seems everything in life is not running so smoothly. Passions, Dreams, Desires seem out of reach while he is tied down to his responsibilites, it seems that every other human being on this earth is progressing while he is stuck motionless. He lets go and breaks free of his dull exsistance "Changes Pace" finds motion and progression in his life.

Take Cover- Acceptance
Guy catches his girlfriend cheating on him can't believe what he sees. She has no idea he caught her so he starts to see how much of a liar she really is. He still goes with keeping quiet about what he knows to be true but still has hope he won't catch her again. She still shows complete love for him while doing what with who knows behind his back he can't handle this much longer game the lie is getting old.

Six Word Memoirs

1.Simple days soon fade to age
2.Anything that is six words yes?
3.Soup is just soggy gross food

4.I was gone last week "absent"
5.More to living than being alive
6.face just what your up against
7.I'm losing your and its effortless - The Fray
8.now this is who we are.
9.not what you had in mind
10.Take take take take it away- The Used

Friday, November 19, 2010

Song Lyrics

Anberlin Paperthin Hymn-
Plot: Guy who's lost his loved one or losing his loved one wants another chance
Setting: Hospital Room, Streets, Hotel Room
Conflict: Denial at what has occured in his life, depression and heart ache and sleepless nights from constant thoughts.
Theme: Moving on, Living free, Recovery.
Lyrics: http://www.plyrics.com/lyrics/anberlin/paperthinhymn.html
Music Video: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x5pg9c_anberlin-paperthin-hymn_music

Sunday, November 14, 2010

The Impulse 2

Teenage guy and girl are sitting in car and its raining. There is tension and okward silence cause the guy who is driving suddenly stops and says nothing. Guy- look, i don't know how to put this but it's over...
Girl- what? what do you mean?
Guy- you know what i mean, i just can't do this anymore this isn't working...
Girl-  so your just breaking up with me? is that it.
Guy - Yeah that's why i came and got you we aren't going to a party, i don't think you even love me anymore.
Girl- No!? i do love you, why are you doing this to me.. to us.
Guy- I knew you where going to say that, don't say you love me when you know you don't. You never text me back when i text you, youre allways busy and constantly flirting with other guys on facebook.
Girl- Well i was never a good texter i'm sorry, don't take that personally cause i do that to everyone. And what facebook!? yeah i talk to my friends on facebook that are guys but i don't really flirt with them..
Guy- Don't play that card with me, i see little suggestive commentary on your "guy firends" statuses and such..
Girl- Alright so your breaking up with me cause of my facebook activity... you have to be kidding me.
Guy- Get out...
Girl- Huh?...
Guy- You heard me, Get out of the car.!..
Girl- What!..No! are you just gonna leave me here and drive off!?
Guy- Hurts don't it.
Girl- Uhhh, yeah that would be horrible of you.. no way am i walking home from here.
Guy- Well now you understand how i feel.
Girl- What is wrong with you?.. i wouldn't tell you to just get out of the car and  then leave you in the cold..
Guy-  I was making a point, you do this to me all the time you act like you don't even care about me and leave me isolated and left in the cold. You never respond to me when i wan't to talk to you and constantly ignore my feelings....
Girl- .... well i'm sorry you feel like that....
Guy- Yeah well sorry dosen't fix anything, so really get out.
Girl- your kidding me.
Guy- No get out of the car.
Girl- Okay fine, ill get out just leave me then.
(Girl opens door and gets out of the car and shuts door)
(Guy rolls down window)
Guy-Bye (drives away)